Amendments to story.

After commencing our filming and playing the clips back, we realised that the actual storyline between the two characters may not be as clear as we expected it would. Although we wanted to maintain the suspense and uncertainty to entice the target audience into watching the whole video; the audience will need to be given a certain amount of information so that this suspense and uncertainty will be effective - not just lead to a mass of confusion and a lot of headaches.

To make the present story more clear, we have decided to show more clips of the characters history together:
-It will be set in the park - the boy and girl are walking together holding hands, etc. But here's the twist - as the camera goes round the tree to focus on the couple again, the boy is seen sitting there by the tree on his own without the girl. In between this will be flashes of the girl texting the boy 'I'm sorry it's over'. This will then set the scene for the boy to be revealed as a 'stalker' following his ex. The girl is later seen going crazy/mad.